Typography 2 - a banner styled poster tryout

For this one, I decided to try out a black bold focal point. I shortened a quote found on the creative industry fact site, but I don't feel that it has much of an impact (which is why I don't want to chose this as the final typography poster. I decided to draw out on photoshop the bold imagery, but it is slightly off angle and out of line. The different text types work well at making an eye catching statement and I really like the over-all posted but I think it has far too many negatives than positives.